Late last year, I was privileged to spend a week as writer-in-residence at Darling Range Sport College in the foothills of Perth. I ran workshops on writing and gave presentations about what it’s like to be a writer, but what I enjoyed most was meeting the students. Most mornings, I was greeted by a cheery hello as I walked past groups of students. They were a bright and lively group of kids who taught me to trust that words have the power to touch lives if only for a moment. In this post, I bring you a selection of my favourite haikus from the students of Darling Range Sports College.
Your expression changed
In just mere seconds no less.
It still frightens me.
Darcy H
Evacuation!
All report to the bus bay!
The teacher ate Ted.
Therese
She hands it to me.
A hidden surprise, wrapped up,
Brown paper and words.
Tarleigh T 9.1
I like big soft dogs.
I think dogs are amazing,
But I bought a cat.
Elli C
He kept on falling,
But then he picked himself up
My little baby brother
Natalie J 7.06
The girl got bullied
And abused and jumped free
Without a second thought.
Taylah K 7.6
Flames and smoke arise
At a small house in the night.
Help comes, I’m grateful.
Lily S Yr 8
Blood over his face,
Red tears fell into his mouth.
Strawberries taste nice.
Bailey D 10.1
Fear, death, confusion.
Bang! The safety switch failed.
The water sprayed.
Tibbles, 10.1
In terror I fall
Caught by the dark hidden rails.
The ride has ended.
Destiny M
The screeching bell rings.
Sweaty palms, worried faces.
Let the exam begin.
Megan H
Rising from the void
Plants growing through the bleakness.
From great death comes life.
Elijah W
I hear the echoes
of the footsteps of the men.
I take my last breath.
Eva S
He ran to the hills.
He hid under the branches.
They found feathers there.
Jordan
A little bit about haiku:
- Originated in Japan
- Developed mid-1600s
- Commonly a personal reaction to an everyday occurrence
- Many themes include nature, feelings, experiences
- Reveals unsuspected significance in detail of nature or human life
- Usually uses simple words and grammar
I love these writing pieces from teenagers that you share!
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Thanks, Tess. Their work really is quite special. 🙂
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These are fabulous – the students must have had so much fun! Well done!
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The students blew me away with their enthusiasm and willingness to have a go.
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Love this! But my favourite is the first Haiku, so awesome
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I love seeing what students come up with. Always a delight.
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